Amniotic Fluid

By | October 7, 2016

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Life! #water #droplets #freshness

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This is Day 1 for #introtopoetry. Day one is Water, and we are supposed to use Haiku.

Here is my haiku (Read more)

You are inside her
Protecting me from the outside
In the 9 month ride!

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11 thoughts on “Amniotic Fluid

  1. Vishal Bheeroo

    The Haiku simply touches the heart and soul. The baby in the embryo seeking protection from everything evil inside the Mom’s womb and the bond of warmth.

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  2. Rashmi

    Apart from portraying the sensitivity of pregnancy for the mother, the Haiku even expresses the fun “ride” for the baby inside. 🙂

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